Friday, November 28, 2008

vampire story

One wednesday, after leaving english class, I went to the candy shop with a friend, Alberto. when we were paying I ask him why he was so pale and when he saw that he didn't have enough money he told ( ) the clerk, "I'll pay you another day", but she didn't trust him and told him, "NO!" He changed in to a vampire and ate her. This answered my question.

After we went to The New Square and we saw Toni, and since Alberto was still hungry, he ate Toni too.

After that we went to The Font picant. There we saw Bet, but sinse he didn't like her very much, and she was silly, he ate her.

Two days later we went to english class again and Mike gave us a lot of homework.
Alberto change into a vampire and ate Mike, Gille, Maria and almost me.

At 8 o'clock we saw the ghosts of the clerck, Toni, Bet, Mike, Gille and Maria. All the ghosts said "Boooooooooo", everyone except Bet, her ghost saie " beeeeeeeeee."

1 comment:

English-on-Wheels said...

...xavier, don't you think it's a bit egocentric of you to be the ONLY survivor!!

I like that you chose different setting for your story: the candy shop, the new square, the Picant Spring, and even MY HOUSE.

The part about the ghosts was also funny!!

Good Work !! Keep it up!

(didn't you remember to add pictures?)